{"id":76,"date":"2008-05-14T10:09:56","date_gmt":"2008-05-14T14:09:56","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/localhost\/wordpress65\/?p=76"},"modified":"2013-03-14T09:44:09","modified_gmt":"2013-03-14T13:44:09","slug":"view-under-slush-pile","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.grayrinehart.com\/blog\/view-under-slush-pile\/","title":{"rendered":"The View From (Under) the Slush Pile"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Some of my writing friends asked me about what I look for when I read slush for Baen Books; especially, what makes a book a good potential fit for the Baen line.<\/p>\n<p>Before I answer, let me point out that if a manuscript is at all close to being publishable, I pass it to the publisher, Toni Weisskopf, and let her make the call.  She instructed me early on that she only expected me to send her the top 1% of submissions, but I&#8217;ve actually sent her more than that.  Some I&#8217;ve only marginally recommended, if I thought they were good books but might not be quite right for Baen.<\/p>\n<p>That being said, I don&#8217;t know if this characterizes any kind of Baen &#8220;profile,&#8221; but I look for: <\/p>\n<p>1.  Stories that are adventurous and fun at their core.  Think &#8220;golden age of SF.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>2.  Stories that are exciting, if not actually action-packed.  (Lots of people believe a Baen book must have a battle, brawl, barfight, gunfight, knifefight, or fistfight on every other page. That&#8217;s not entirely true, but it&#8217;s not entirely false either. Baen fans appreciate action; and what&#8217;s more, they know well what makes for realistic action and are ruthless about inconsistencies.)<\/p>\n<p>3.  Stories that make sense &#8212; e.g., with science, economics, etc., that ring true &#8212; and are internally consistent. (This requirement is quite clear in the Baen guidelines.)<\/p>\n<p>4.  Stories in which characters&#8217; actions and the consequences of those actions make sense and seem plausible.<\/p>\n<p>5.  Stories that, under all the events and characterization, are essentially hopeful. Basically, in a Baen book you should know pretty well who the good guys and bad guys are, and the good guys need to win. Dark and difficult things may happen in a Baen book, but the whole story can&#8217;t be dismal.<\/p>\n<p>Note that manuscript mechanics &#8212; spelling, grammar, and punctuation &#8212; aren&#8217;t on the list.  That&#8217;s because, as Toni puts it, &#8220;Story trumps all.&#8221; So a good story (i.e., a good SF or F story) has a chance even if the manuscript isn&#8217;t pristine.  But you still need to proofread well and correct all the typos you can, because you don&#8217;t want us to get distracted from the story you&#8217;re trying to tell.<\/p>\n<p>When I ran this list by Toni, she wrote, <\/p>\n<blockquote><p>You can also add that I want to be charmed by the author. Slush is like a blind date &#8212; heck, it&#8217;s like speed dating &#8212; first impressions count. 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